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I considered briefly,
The possibility of jumping

I wouldn’t have been the first.

I’d seen pictures of a woman once,
Curled up in a barrel,
She must have been a daredevil.
Who else would tempt the beings of hell,
By dancing down a waterfall?
The only thing lying between
Her and death’s embrace,
A thin seal of wood.
(probably leaky)

I’d once read an article of a boy
Exhausted with the effort
Of molding joy out of sorrow.
His faith in life so diminished,
To throw what was left of it,
Into the curling, hungry mists beneath.
His body was in tow.

I’d heard the story
Told by firelight,
Of a lady who’s love
Was cast aside.
And with a heart that grew to be,
Like a raven’s wing
Seething with vengeance ripe and hot
Gingerly grasped her last lover’s hand,
And pulled it down with her,
To keep him in an embrace eternal,
In her bed of vapor and fog.

Watching the white water,
Tumble and dash across the rocks
Eager to fling itself over the edge
And spill into the death others,
Had already attained
I considered jumping,

Briefly.

For a moment.

Before turning to find,
The footpath along its side
The safe way
To the end.
©2008-2010 ~EenPaddestoel
:iconeenpaddestoel:

Author's Comments

i can't swim very well, anyhow

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!! Jump was featured here [link] very very kind! :)

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:iconrothving:
You continue to amaze me with your poems! I really think you have an amazing gift with words, you should release a book of poetry or something. Heck, I'd buy it!
:iconyozola:
ooh I like this.

I should have know there was a twist from the start.

As if you'd write a suicide poem.

I like how you told about three very different jumps there. It made it quite interesting, to me at least.

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Life's too short to want to quit early! -My best friend, Nick.
:iconeenpaddestoel:
o stoppit! *blush blush*

besides, I'd give you a free one hah :)
:iconeenpaddestoel:
lol yah :) ms bubbles and happyness would totally write a poem about suicide

however i think everyone, no matter who they are, thinks about it just once in their life. even if it's only to wonder what it would feel like, or why they might do it. so it is sort of about that, i think ?

also people who go down niagra falls in barrels are idiots >.>
:iconrothving:
I'm gonna hold you to that. :P
:iconyozola:
Yeah, everyone thinks about it that way once. When I said I had thought about it (in the sense you mentioned) my mom flipped out. x) Silly old ladies.

They're idiots but they're fun to point and laugh at.

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Life's too short to want to quit early! -My best friend, Nick.
:iconeenpaddestoel:
hey now, respect your elders!

...and get off my lawn! whippersnapper.

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