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Drip, drop slips the sweet rain
Lapsing lazily down
Swallowing the sky
With its cascading curtain

Weeping heavens pelt the earth
Cooling it to its core
Stirring up the grime
And tilling out the dirt

Rivers forever flooding
Beside seas within seas
Regrowth and rebirth
Among rot and decay

Plants ushered up by a sun
That’s veiled away in vapor
The only warmth coming
In the path of lightning-fire

Howling hounds of thunder
Shaking the shivering, icy soil
And rumbling deep within the rain
Sighing into the background
Of the hurricane harmonics
Simply one melody
In the symphony of the sky
©2008-2010 ~EenPaddestoel
:iconeenpaddestoel:

Author's Comments

this is supposed to be about a place where the rain never stops

like that one twilight zone LoL ;D

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some very very nice people decided to feature 'rain world' in their journals! so exciting!
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:iconfaerysong:
wow, this is amazing! the last stanza is particularly poignant and beautiful to me... I so miss the thunder
:iconeenpaddestoel:
thanks very very much :) I only worked on this poem while it was raining to really get it right hehe, i think it was worth the inconvinience

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