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What lies beyond the corridor?
That dark foreboding door,
With carved oak features
And glaring mahogany eyes
The handles of polished gold,
Daring you to ruin
Their prim perfection
With a dirty human touch
Heavy hinges creaking in disdain
And paltry protest
But behind their ornate gaze
Jeweled eyes and ears,
Painted with scenes of riches and kings
Is the soiled city street
And busy lives hurrying by,
Without even a glance.
©2008-2010 ~EenPaddestoel
:iconeenpaddestoel:

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just a poem :)

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the door was featured by three very sweet people, they make me giggle & skip hehe!
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:iconchrisdayo:
Niiiice. I love the way you describe things

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Try saying this 3x fast :

Niwa no niwa ni wa, niwa no niwatori wa niwaka ni wani wo tabeta.

"In (Mr) Niwa's garden, two chickens suddenly ate a crocodile."
:juggle: :bounce: :clap: :stupid:
:iconeenpaddestoel:
thank you :) i wasn't so sure if I liked this one so I decided to test it out on you all tee hee
:iconchrisdayo:
I say test success! Such a nice poem :)

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Try saying this 3x fast :

Niwa no niwa ni wa, niwa no niwatori wa niwaka ni wani wo tabeta.

"In (Mr) Niwa's garden, two chickens suddenly ate a crocodile."
:juggle: :bounce: :clap: :stupid:
:iconeenpaddestoel:
*cheers and hurrahs!*

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